Board Thread:Pitches/@comment-7665418-20140421200155/@comment-8475730-20140512015945

I really like the plot and the slogan! And here's the same plot, but I jumbled around a bit, if you like it better:

Brian S. Fosterman was the number one Broadway kid. Play after play, he had continus sucess and great reviews. Until a post by a very popular blogger, claiming he had delibratly hurt another castmate flooded the media. Now he's back somewhere he never thought he would have to go again: Public School. His theatric personalitynor his famous background could get him even through the first day. But luck rises when two best friends, Jessica and Michael, save him from.the dangers of their schools pop squad, and take him under their wing. Now Brian, along with his new friemds, tackle the struggles of high school all while trying to save Brian's image.

What do you think?