Board Thread:Pitches/@comment-3532537-20141117032905

So I remember we were talking about the "Bounds of Holly" movie pitch and I pitched an idea underneath. Idk if you guys saw it or if it was considered and I wasn't trying to take anything away from the original pitch. I just wanted to pitch it hear fresh to get some feedback because i dont know what happened to the other pitch to be honest, but here it is.

Holly Anderson is a normal 16 year old girl from Denver, Colorodo. She's a pretty popular around school, comes from a pretty weathly family, and is a total girly girl, and suprisingly really good at snow boarding. Holly seems to have a pretty normal life, expect well..... Here dad is Santa Claus. Holly knows this and is use to this. Her father Dr. Jason Anderson works as a Doctor, but in November starts preparing for Christmas as Santa Claus. Her mother Diane Anderson is a real estate agent and helps out in November to. When Holly's arch rival, Denise Dakota and her both get invited to a major holiday Christmas party by the school's hot popular boy Jason. She tries to show up in her new car had dad gives her for Christmas to win over Jason and outshine Denise, but when her Dad gets majorly sick just before Christmas, she has to fill in at last minute. Holly totally doesn't want to, but flies to the north pole with her mom where she meets Emerald, Santa's first Elf in command. Who helps her learn about some new holiday powers she is given to help her prepare for Christmas and goes through training (She has little scenes where shes at school and her friends wonder if she's okay. Like she touches her locker and it freezes and the door falls off and she tries to play if off by laughing and saying, "my locker must've caught a cold hahahah", she'd be sarcastically laughing. Similar to how Liv does sometimes haha). At first Holly isn't really selfish, but she wants to go the party and outshine Denise, but after becoming Santa girl, she begins to start going over the naughty and nice list. She has to be totally selfless and caring in order to truly master her powers. She tries to sneak outside Denise's window to find out what she's wearing to the dance. She then hear's her talking to herself in her room and learns Denise was bullied at her old school and feels like she has to outshine others to fit in. Holly then realizes why she wasn't able to control her powers. She was too mad at her dad and only thinking about her self and a party to impress a guy. She realizes that children and people love Santa and she was only thinking of her self. Emerald then tells her by realizing this she passes the final test. She tells Jason she can't attend his party due to a "family emergency" he then goes "you're blowing off my party to help your doctor dad?", she then tells him off at his party and pushes him in the pool. BUT By her first flying the sleigh it crashes, now she has to figure out a way to fly with the reindeer to save Christmas, she then looks at her new car and smiles at her mom. Her mom says "oh no! you're not flying your new car as a sleigh" and she then says "But mom! it's the only way to save Christmas!" and her mom then says "ugh! okay fine!" (and then she gets excited and hugs her mom and she runs to the car and gets it together). Her mom then says "I really hope the insurance company covers that!" basically she saves christmas. at the end of the movie she tells Denise she wont be competing with her anymore and gives her a present which is a necklace that says "Special", and it goes like this

Denise: (Denise reading the neckless) "Special", i dont get it. Why'd you get me a necklace (does a little smirk and laugh to impress her friends)

Holly: Because you are special Denise. And you don't need a guy (Looks at Jason) or anyone to make you feel special, because you already are.

Denise: This is the nicest gift anyone's ever given me. . . .thank you (the two hug)

Denise: I'm still going to outshine you at prom. Holly: I wouldn't expect any less. (The two smile)

(Jason walks up) Jason: So which one of you, wants to be my date to the prom this year?

(Denise walks away) Denise: Nope, sorry jason. I'm special and I don't need anyone to validate me. (looks at Holly and smiles)

ETC etc.

SORRY I KNOOOOOOOOOOOOW it's a lot! But I wanted you guys to really be able to picture it in your heads :) lol her dad than thanks her and offers to buy her a new at the end because hers is ruined. and she tells him it's okay, she's just happy he is better. He is proud she is a part of the business and thinks she's done an amazing job and is happy of the person she is becoming :) 