Board Thread:Pitches/@comment-24074199-20150515220224/@comment-24074199-20150518191937

Sorry to rush this, but is there anything I need to add or remove? Here is an updated premise and characters:

Premise

The series follows Trails, a Volkswagen Beetle, and Maggie, the youngest member of the Jepsen family. Trails is put in Larry’s, Maggie’s father, garage after not being useful. Maggie got Trails as a college graduation present, but that was before she knew that he was way more than not useful. After getting the car she found an unopened envelope inside Trails that said: "Please take care of him. Whatever your problem, he'll help you find the answer." After once being something that could be destroyed, Trails was way better looking now after he got a heavy makeover. However, after Trails takes Maggie against her will to the garage where her boyfriend Kevin works as a mechanic, she stumbled across the thought of selling him or not. How will Maggie deal with a car that has its own mind?

Characters


 * Maggie Jepsen - Maggie is the protagonist of the series. She has just graduated from college and has her whole life ahead of her. But what does that when she gets a brand new (old) car from her father?
 * Marcus - Marcus is Maggie's love interest. He has a large interest in fixing cars and he also works as a mechanic.
 * Larry - Larry is Maggie's father. She bought Trails a year ago, but has surprisingly enough never used him. She gave Maggie Trails as her college graduation present.
 * Rae Jepsen - Rae is Maggie's brother. He also has an interest in racing, but isn't that good because of an accident that happened for a few years back. Him and Maggie often fight about the silliest things.
 * Kelly - Maggie's friend from college. They've been friends since they were small and have a close relationship.
 * Crazy Mac - The owner of the shop where Maggie bought her car. For now he is only seen in the pilot. Might come back later, though.