Board Thread:Pitches/@comment-24799839-20150805133228/@comment-8475730-20150805193034

Actually, I can see this happening if you made the forth member a drummer, and the pianist a bassit, because modern lot, that's what a rock band consists of. Idk if you've heard of Hey Violet, but there also a rock band, and their second guitarist, Miranda Miller, also plays the electric keyboard so if could be a little bit like that. Modern day bands just don't have acoustic piano that much, unless they are in the classical music department, or the song is set at a slower pace (and usually then they play the electric). Plus the beginning is a lot like Lemonade moth, and lie we had mentioned on a lot of pitches, you need to try to make your. Pitches a little more original. Maybe to thrown things up a bit, you can add Sierra to the band, it would be like a reverse Hey violet (they have 3 girls, one boy).

And also, how come on all your pitched they say "in love"? Shouldn't you change it to just crush? I mean, is it like Farkle from GMW with the whole Maya and Riley thing, or is it more like Shelby from BFW with the big crush in the boy? You have to be more specific.

Your characters also need more personality. What defines them from everyone else? All I see up there is their age, what they play, there smarts, and their interests. You need to add more stuff, like what defines them from someone else. For example,


 * Ryan Grimms - a 16 year old teenager and current sophomore in high school. Ryan has played the been playing the piano (even though if it were me is change the instrument to electric piano or bass/drums) and when he grows up, it's his dream to play in front of big audience of screaming fans. He is a quick wit, and can always seem to get himself out if a situation, even if everything seems like a diastater. He has a huge crush on Sierra Lewis, and has sense the third grade, but she doesn't seem to like him, or even notice him at all. He believes that the band is a great way to start if his dream of a musical career, but he only has one problem: he doesn't have a band. Or at least, not yet.

Maybe the band can meet by all being soloists on the internet? It happens to be quite a few bands that were brought up to fame that way, and so it could be really interesting to see a show rise up from that.

Sorry for the long post, but tags what I have to say.