Board Thread:Pitches/@comment-25828160-20160804034813/@comment-4146635-20160809031258

Ok so I like this, nice job! But there a few things I'm a bit confused about and think could be revised. So Mark's mother was killed at birth which haunted him as a child and now at 21 years old he receives a mysterious letter referencing her death? But what is the show actually about? Is it just him getting continuous letters? That just seems a bit plain to me. I also don't understand why it's called Lies, ya know? So far, I haven't read anything about a lie. I just think this show needs more. :)