Board Thread:Pitches/@comment-24799839-20151030171819/@comment-28027843-20151101121129

I don't think it is either, but it does still needs work. As a Wattpad writer and perfectionist in one, I know when work is needed heavily. And this is (no offense) like one of those books I really like then something happens that doesn't throw the story off and it's not a plot twist, it just makes it boring. Also, can I suggest not having so many boys in the girls bathrooms. Or the school at least having security cameras to check who's going in there. Like, come on! You may as well make the whole cast girls! (Sorry just, I feel really strongly about genders lately. I dunno whether it's late puberty or what, I just do).