Board Thread:Pitches/@comment-24342733-20140126190401

Four friends named Rachel,Josh,and Sky,and Chase,find an old box that has never been opened buried next to the siblings' s tree. The four friends dig up the box and open it to see what's inside,only to find a pen. Rachel ends up pushing a red button on the pen and go into an parallel universe. Rachel becomes a shy girl,Sky becomes a popular girl who is talkative,Chase ends up being sarcastic and not so bright,and Josh becomes athletic and no so bright also. The four try to get back to their original universe before it's too late.

Do you think it needs any tweaks or anything else? I'd like to hear your options. I honestly don't think it's good :P but I want to hear what you think,we can chat any day about it. 