Board Thread:Pitches/@comment-29323496-20160730163905/@comment-29323496-20160807202913

Seventeen

note
This is somewhat based of 16 Wishes

plot
For 17 years, Sullie Langley has thought her life as nothing but average and boring and wishes for a more exciting life.

On her birthday, she wakes up hoping it to be the best day ever but it ends up anything but the best.

In an old antique store after school, she finds an old knock knack (clock ? Idk) that grants wishes and jokingly she wishes that she was no longer Sullie Langley but Jocelyn Chae.

The wish ends up coming true and they switch bodies. She realizes that Jocelyn's life isn't as perfect as it seems.

(Do I keep this last part of the plot) The only thing is that Sullie is given only a week/ or month to to live as Jocelyn, if she doesn't make it back in time she will be stuck in her new body forever. Will she make it back in time ?

characters

 * Sullie Langley

The main protagonist, who thinks her life is boring and envies the rich life of Jocelyn Chae. Sullie has had it with her boring life and she makes a one wish that could impact her life forever.


 * Carter Langley

Sullie's 15 year old brother who has tendencies to get on her nerves. She thinks he's annoying and he thinks she's a brat but he tries to make Sullie's birthday the best one ever and ends up making a mess of it.

(idk what I should change about him)


 * Roy Cohen

Sullie's best friend since the second grade and Jocelyn's former best friend.


 * Jocelyn Chae

The sort of antagonist of the story, Jocelyn is the rich girl and she's not exactly the nicest to Sullie and she loves to show off her riches.

(Note: Jocelyn may or may not be aware that she and Sullie switched bodies.)


 * Justin Rowe

Jovelyn's Crush or boyfriend.He is a very popular guy in school and he is on the basketball team. Justin shows interest in Sullie which Jocelyn dislikes.