Board Thread:Pitches/@comment-8475730-20150313014353/@comment-3532537-20150313024712

I read the full plot and everything. I like how you did everything and you detailed it realy nice :)

however, Is there really a happy ending for these kids? Like four orphans who work for a living and don'teven go to school or anything? I personally don't think it would be right the channel but that's just my opinion :)