Board Thread:Pitches/@comment-25535069-20150428201832/@comment-25375217-20150428223022

It is kind of dark.

I came up with something that kind of changes it significantly but it's also kind of the same? Lol idk.

What if Ella was poisoned? Maybe they stayed the night in the mansion years ago and they woke up and she was dead and it was declared a heart attack (or something). They go back to the mansion and weird things start to happen and that's when they realize she was poisoned. Then the rest of the show is kind of a Clue-type "whodunnit".

Idk how it would continue for more than one season, though. It's still kind of dark, but it would probably just air late at night (9 or 9:30) because it's not scary/gory/etc.