Board Thread:Pitches/@comment-7665418-20141014004737/@comment-3532537-20141014231716

or maybe as they are fighting with the mud, the narrator (the main character shows everyone) like "character's name" (shows him trying to pick up a big pile of mund with a shovel and falling down) ended up becoming the leader of a cool rock band, as for "name" and "name" (shows them laughing at the first kid next to each other smiling) they went on a few dates and things seem to work out for them and then it shows "the main character" (he smiles as the screen freezes and his picture fades out) i became the lucky guy who came out of his shell and got an amazing group of friends.

the holding hands things is good but honestly i feel like we shouldn't give too much away ya know? you wanna add a sense of mystery to it? like what happens. This leaves the door open to possible sequals and such. Similar to TBM they came out of the movie and ended up on the beach, in zapped she threw her phone away and someone else got it (even though they might not do a sequal, they still have a big possibility and it leaves the audiences wondering ya know)