Board Thread:Pitches/@comment-4146635-20150205053828/@comment-4146635-20150218231458

Okay so as much as I loved that part, I changed the second to last scene I did (fourth response with scene descriptions in it, second paragraph). I kind of changed the direction I want the episode to go in, their first day isn't supposed to be all great like it was written originally. I also changed a few parts in the last response. Not much, only the first five sentences or so (and instead of Kels and Kris having trouble keeping up, this is the one class they actually do a good job keeping up in).