Board Thread:Pitches/@comment-24799839-20150816001354/@comment-25375217-20150901170610

Well, but where do they live? If they live in the middle of nowhere, then he wouldn't be able to get on any commercials unless they were local. He would have to live somewhere like LA, New York, or maybe Miami. And I'm pretty sure we have shows in all of those places so that would be kind of weird.

The sideplots just don't line up very well. There needs to be a connection. Like, let's look at "The Great Indoors" from Phineas & Ferb. We have the P&F plot, where they're building the biosphere, we have the Doof and Perry plot, where Perry is fighting Doof, and then we have the Candace plot where she wants to know why Jeremy likes her. They're all interconnected though- every time Jeremy almost tells Candace why he likes her, something in Phineas and Ferb's inventions stops him. Just before Phineas and Ferb almost get in trouble because Linda sees the biosphere, part of Doofenshmirtz's Raininator carries it away. Stuff like that. There's nothing connecting Mason's plot with Eric's.