Board Thread:Pitches/@comment-28027843-20151017193728

I've been working on a few and thanks to my trusty Wattpad follower s I'm pitching this, but it does need some editing from professionals like you guys.

Plot: To make the childish game of hide and seek more interesting, best friends Alia, Lexy, Rosie, Valeria, Jay, Levi, Johnny and Logan decide to play in the forest. However, they all lose each other and find themselves lost in the trees.

Characters: Alia Mabella - “He’ll be fine. And if not, I’ll thank Satan later.” She is the oldest of all her siblings, including twin brother Levi, and the only girl in her house. Her mother passed away giving birth to her twelfth child leaving Alia to be daddy’s little girl and most prized child. She shows very little fear and love towards her brother, but deep is down is very worried ‘The Teller’ has captured him. Lexy Vamia - “I don’t think we should do this.” Lexy is the prettiest in the group. She is very smart but never shows it and usually doubts herself. When her friends look at her for ideas, she always shrugs her shoulders – even when she has an idea. Sometimes, when people don’t listen to her, she does her own thing. She also has a secret no one knows. Rosie Jamanica - “Let me go!” Rosie is a smart girl and often uses it. She can quickly decrypt and decipher messages from ‘The Teller’. She grew up on a farm so the creepy crawlies and wild animals can’t scare her, she actually finds them cute. She is also very shy and is scared to come face to face with ‘The Teller’. Valeria Galan - “I can’t even sleep without bad things happening!” Valeria is described by her friends as Sleeping Beauty as she has a tendency to fall asleep during class. She hates being called that but goes along with it anyway. She also hates the thought of ‘The Teller’ and all things evil so she tries to find her way out many times, all leading to bad events. She has a crush on Tyler. Jay Garcia - “Yeah, it’s called ‘Long Distance’ for a reason.” Jay is Lexy’s long distance cousin. He just moved into the area and instantly clicked with the other boys. Him and Lexy have more of a brother sister relationship as they very frequently have fights. He also seems to be very suspicious of Valeria. Tyler Mabella - “If you want blood, take my sister! She doesn’t matter to the world!” Tyler hates his sister with passion. He is always trying to get rid of her, although she is daddy’s little girl and protected 24/7. He thinks his sister is just over-reacting but will soon realise that without her father, he needs to step in as a father figure. Johnny Tavelli - Just get rid of the speaker so I can live her in peace already!” Jay has been beaten and bruised by his father and actually enjoys it in the forest, away from home. He sees Valeria as a sister, leading him to start fighting with Jay. He says once ‘The Teller’ is dead, he is going to stay in the forest away from his family. Logan Harvey - “Okay, whoever this talker is, just tell him to go buy some ice cream factories!” Logan is fun, loveable and certainly crazy. He makes something out of every day. Whether it’s his out-of-tune, off-key singing or just some wacky statement, he will sure make you laugh. He is usually the one who has the stupid ideas that don’t work. 'The Teller' - “You are mine, you are mine, come all and with me sing this rhyme.” A creepy old lady who makes it almost impossible to escape the forest. She attempts to kidnap some of the gang, and sometimes succeeds but will always fail. She has a mole that she often fights with and wants something they have.

A lot of peoples. Meh, I was bored. I have three episodes pitched right now but they aren't very good. Also, can you PLEASE try and come up with a better title? 