Board Thread:Pitches/@comment-25214621-20150427011153/@comment-3532537-20150502041002

Even if it doesn't work, we can do like a movie series? Or trilogy? Like the hunger games or HSM? I think that'll work good but either way.

Okay, now back to the actual pitch. I like how it works out, we do have a lot of princess themed things but since these are just regular girls trying to be princesses. I think it gives the story a good edge. Here's my thing though, why is America entering the competition. her mother bribes her so she will be fortunate and wealthy if she wins, but why would her boyfriend? Like I get he wants her to be happy, but she can't cheat on him if she wins? lol I think that's a little petty lol

Also I had an idea, this is why I also think it could work as a movie, what if the boyfriend was one of America's best friends who secretly liked her (i know the cliche) but maybe she enters to win for her family and doesn't expect to fall for the prince but one day they have a deep talk.

(Maxon enters room) [Maxon is a prince so he talks kind of royal right?] Maxon: I see you like to watch the moon at night. As do I?

America: Spying on the ladies huh? That's not very royal of you?

Maxon: I get it. You do not wish to be here, I understand where you're-

America: (she cuts him off) -please. Just save the "wishy washy", you don't know anything about me.

Maxon: You're right I do not. But I do understand what it is like having to please your parents. Having a family that doesn't get you. It is tradition to host these events. I do not wish to condone in finding love this way.

America: I'm doing this for my family to better them and myself. If I was on my own I wouldn't be here. You snap a finger and you have everything while I spent years trying to impress my family and all they want for me is to win this. Well I believe I don't need a "person" to make me happy. You're nothing like me.

Maxon: Maybe not. But the fighting, resentment, and trying to prove others wrong for doubting you I get that. Lady Singer do you know the worst part about letting others make choices for you?-

America: *Looks over at him*

Maxon: -Letting anger do it. It only ends up hurting you more than anyone else.


 * America thinks for a second and doesn't respond as Maxon gets up from the table they were sitting*

Maxon: Well I must be off now. It was a pleasure Miss Singer. Good look in tomorrow's events.

lol sorry i got carried away idk if that's your vision or not but that last part was just an idea..