Board Thread:Pitches/@comment-24799839-20150805133228/@comment-25375217-20150813200042

...that's not really their relationship grows. What changes that makes her say yes? How do they bond? For that matter, how does everyone else bond? The band? When we meet them they're three complete strangers who just happen to sound good together- which is really similar to Lemonade Mouth, but in Lemonade Mouth they slowly learn more about each other and start to open up as they realize they each have a lot in common. What do Ryan, Brian, and Luke have in common that makes them close friends? Or what do they have different in an opposites attract sort of way? What about Brian and Carl? Do they grow closer as brothers or is Carl always just annoying? If he's always annoying, why do Brian and Luke agree to help him with karate?

This is important stuff that helps flesh out your characters and make them more relatable, and it's important in a series.