Board Thread:Pitches/@comment-25535069-20150508213529/@comment-25535069-20150509004319

Thank you!

-Scene 2-

After the opening theme, the second scene starts off with the group standing outside the mansion. "Andi, go in." Joe says. She hesitates, and opens the door. The group wlaks into the mansion, awkwardly, since they haven't been in the house for 3 years in counting.

"Wow. I'm in my dead girlfriend's house. On her death-a-versary. Best day ever." Ashton says, sarcastically. Joe tries to hold back a smile, and Marilyn looks at a picture frame. "Guys, remember this?" she asks, holding the frame up. It is a picture of the last day they saw Ella. September 12, 2012.

"Yeah...." Ashton trailed off his words.

-Flashback-

''"Ashton, I'm not feeling so well. What'd you put in this drink?" Ella asked. "Nothing. I just got the punch from that table." he said. She started to get weak, so Ashton helped her from the dancefloor to the regular floor. Ella held onto his arm, "Ashton, I'm serious. What did you out in that drink? Ow!" she yelled. "Ashton. Answer the question." ''

''"Nothing! Did you grab the wrong drink?" Ashton asked. "Why would I do that? I'm not stupid." Ella said. Ashton looked over to the table she set her drink on, supposedly. "Because your drink is still over there." Ashton pointed to the table.''

''Ella stood up, "Take me home." she said, weakening her voice when she talked, Ashton sighed. "Okay." Ella stood up, but when she did, she fell to the ground. When they tried waking her up, they couldn't.''

Ella Howard was dead.

-Scene 3-

"Marilyn, you stay here with the others. I'm going to go up to Ella's room." Ashton said. "What...why?" Marilyn whined. "Because she was my girlfriend." Ashton said, running upstairs to Ella's room.

"It hasn't changed in 3 years. Shocker." Ashton said, slowly walking into the room. The walls were a baige color, with a golden-type painting on the wall beside her bed. The bed was king-sized, and was swiss-colored. The floor was brown carpet, and in front of her bed, there was a TV. She also had a bathroom, a walk in closet, and many more things.

But the thing that struck his eye, was the laptop on her desk.

Suprisingly, it was open, and was opened up to "Gmail". Ashton, being ashton, looked at the laptop, and started to open up some of her emails. "Where are you?" someone asked on the emails.

"Hiding." Ella replied....5 hours ago.