Board Thread:Pitches/@comment-25517884-20141130120501/@comment-4041126-20150101184625

The homework machine has a plot description, not a summary. You see how Tatertat and Silly leave theirs with a question for the reader to find out what happens? In yours, you told us what the ending is in the description. We're asking you to describe the plot without telling what happens, just a little description, if you know what i mean? Sorry if I didn't explain well. :)