Board Thread:Pitches/@comment-24074199-20141212225524/@comment-3532537-20141218024411

Wait, see this kind of goes back to the rule I pitched.

now before I remember saying during the show pilot process im not sure how i feel about him as a character and you said you wanted him. Now Idk who Elliot Preston was played by, but I don't think it's fair to cut the character aand change the episodes of the show after he was officially casted as a main character for the show. Could you imagine if I casted a movie and at last minute changed the main character? is that really fair?

I think it's becoming to close to lab rats a bit and you gotta slow down and give the show time to progress too. These are just my opinions, but Connor as a character to me seems unnecessary. It seems like Troy is trying to get another best friend? he already has one. I thought that eventually maybe his ebst friend would find out his secret and start to help him on missions in whatever normal way he can. Similar to Harper or Charlotte from Henry danger, they never actually go on the missions but they help. The point of the English guy is to be that sort of frenemy or rival, similar to tinka (but not really, i just can't think of anyone else or maybe jade from victorious idk) but someone who is on your side but wants to do better than you which secretly makes you do better as well. Even though, Troy and the english dude don't get along in season two they secretly admire each others strengths and tries to out do the other one. They make each other better by being together even though they can't stand it. You see if he comes in late season 2 (and they say ackerman international sends him) it's kind of leading the audience into "hmm what's Ackerman International?" and "when will we get to see?" now you don't want them to wait to long now, that's why you introduce him late season 2. And if season 3 comes up he can officially join the team when they get promoted to ackerman international status. Imagine if alex became family wizard in season 2? or if leo got bionics in season 2? You have to give the audience time and continuity before changes. Especially since in season 1 both Troy and Myra are new too each other. Season 2 you want them to bit more in sync, more trusting of each other and more able to rely on each others abilities. maybe even hang out outside of the spy business. You can't introduce to much. You can't add another element without getitng everyone familiar with the elements you already have ya know?

you don't have to listen to my ideas or anything and sorry if that came across rude or anything im honestly not trying to sound mean or anything because i understand what it's like getting excited about ideas but the best things come in time. If you do everything in season 2 there wont be a need for season 3? Idk how long you planned to go with the show but lets look at hannah montana for a second in periods;


 * Season 1 - Viewers learn about Miley and Hannah and the get to see her life.
 * Season 2 - Rico is added as a new character and Miley gets a tad older and goes on new adventures and sings with new artist.
 * Season 3 - Hannah gets a new look and new music
 * Season 4 - Miley struggles balancing two lives and tells her secret and deals with the aftermath.

If she told her secret in season 3 there would be no reason for a season 4 ya know? i think if you plan on going 4 seasons (yes that's waydown the road) season 4 should be when the agency gets revealed because the international would be the new thing for season 3? and maybe he decides if he should go to college or if he should join the public force or somehting and all that other stuff (because he is still a teenager) lol idk all in all i like your ideas but i basically dont see a need for characters like Connor and that Lance should step forward possbily more in season2 (if he finds out about his secret) maybe he thinks troy and myra like each other because they're always running off together until he finds out there spies? and Elliot never really had a storyline he shouldn't have been casted in the first place because it's not fair to the manager.

sorry i know it's a lot XD