Board Thread:Pitches/@comment-21032197-20140126101351/@comment-4146635-20140126185116

I kind of conjured something of an idea we could go with.


 * Bella Cinder is the princess of Rosadario, an astonishing island outside of South America that is quickly becoming one of the most developed islands in the world. But, when Rosadario is attacked by General Santiago, a Puerto Rican general who wants to take over Rosadario and all of their goods, Bella finds herself being quickly evacuated while everyone else on the island is left under Santiago's wrath. Bella doesn't understand why she was the only one evacuated and wants to go back to Rosadario with her people. But it is soon revealed to her that Santiago is after a locket Bella gave her father before he died. In the locket, her father stored the code to all of Rosadario technology, technology that could cause a war in Rosadario. Bella is the only one who could possibly figure out where it is and it must be found it before Santiago does. So suddenly Bella finds herself going undercover and transformed into a spy in a race against evil to find what could destroy Rosadario and save her country.

So yeah I guess it's a lot different but I hope you like it. I feel like I completely changed your story but ya know, I was thinking something like a mix of Princess Protection Program and a spy theme. I don't want to completely change your vision, but I was honestly thinking of making the main princess and the country of Spanish descent since we don't have much of that on the wiki. This is just an idea.