Board Thread:Pitches/@comment-25214621-20150615033802

To be honest, I'm not quite sure about this. So, I'm just going to put it out there like Sil did with Hospitality, and I'll decide if I want to pitch it after hearing some opinions...

Anyway! I am "currently" (And by currently, I mean that I put the story on hold...) writing a story on Wattpad, and it's a fanfic about Ashton Irwin, but for this I'll just make a new character to replace Ashton, and make a few changes to this story.

PLOT: Three years ago, Marilyn Fitzgerald and Jasper Hampton were the high school sweethearts. They had been dating since the start of their sophomore year in high school, and they were "perfect" for each other. But after they graduated three years ago, Jasper left Marilyn to go on tour with his band almost immediately, and that was the last time they saw each other, or even talked in general.

Now, Marilyn is now 21, and she's home in Chicago while Jasper is stll making music with his band. But when Marilyn's best friend is getting married, that brings Jasper into town, and he is destined to make things right between him and Marilyn. But he has three days to do that.

(If you wanted to read how the story is going so far, then: https://www.wattpad.com/story/35098217-three-days-ashton-irwin! And like I said, I will change the story around a little bit if I decide to pitch it and this could possibly be a late night thing (Like EF :p))

Characters:

Marilyn Fitzgerald- Marilyn Fitzgerald is a 21 year old college student at Notre Dame, and she is currently home in Chicago for the summer. She dated Jasper until her high school graduation three years ago, and they haven't talked to each other since then. Marilyn is usually sweet, but she tends to be extremely bitter when she's annoyed, and she tends to make sarcastic remarks often. But she's very loved by her friends and family.

Jasper Hampton- Jasper Hampton is a 21 year old musician in the popular band that I haven't exactly thought of a name yet, but suggestions would be appreciate for the band name with two of his old high school friends. Jasper is an extremely sweet person, and he usually puts other people before him. He dated Marilyn in high school until they both graduated, and he left her so he could go on tour with his band (and he did ask her to come with him, but she declined because she was going to college.)

Elizabeth Stabler- Elizabeth Stabler is Marilyn's best friend. They met in high school when Marilyn first moved to Chicago, and they have been best friends ever since. Elizabeth is currently engaged to Jack Buchanan after dating since their freshman year in high school. The two got engaged after she graduated from Joliet Junior College. Elizabeth is normally a kind hearted person, but she continues to act different as her wedding date approaches.

Rose, who's last name is to be determined- Rose is Marilyn's other best friend that she met when she first got to Notre Dame. She is also from the Chicago area, and Rose became good friends with Elizabeth after Marilyn introduced them. Rose is a bit crazy about boys, and she is known for having failed relationships. Like Marilyn, she tends to make sarcastic remarks, but she can often be a bit bitter. But her friends still manage to love her, anyway.

Jack Buchanan- Jack Buchanan is Elizabeth's fiance. Jack happens to be good friends with Marilyn, and he has that type of friendship with Rose where they always insult each other. Jack is typically a nice guy and he always tries looking out for Elizabeth, but can snap at times.

Mark Shepard- Mark is Marilyn's on-and-off boyfriend, and they are currently broken up. Mark is extremely controlling and overprotective, Rose absolutely hates him, and he oftens fights with Marilyn, but she usually finds her way back to him, and they're okay for a few weeks. During this, Mark only makes an appearance at the start, and Marilyn uses him to make it appear to Jasper that she's over him.

Like I said, I'm not too sure about this. But if I decide to make it a movie pitch, I will, but until then, I would love to hear some opinions :) 