Board Thread:Pitches/@comment-28027843-20151029140036

I'm writing a Wattpad book and because I love this place, I'm giving you the opportunity to see it first! On Wattpad, it's called "The Game" but it's not that good of a title and I might change it. This is loosely based off Five Nights at Freddy's.

Lola and Aeron are best friends. They have been neglected and hated by their own families which has made them bitter. They created the game and it has killed many people, as they were unable to finish it. However, what happens when Leo and Robbie start playing?

Characters:
 * Lola Vental - Lola is a headstrong bad girl. She can easily scare people and not someone you want to make angry. She doesn't like being told what to do and won't do as people say. Instead of using their real names, she calls Robbie "Preppy" and Leo "Jockstrap" because of their clothing styles (does that make sense?). She is also dubbed as crazy by many people, including herself. She is how she is as she felt neglected as a child in her sister's shadow. She created the game, with Aeron's help.
 * Aeron Lostan - Aeron is Lola's best friend. He does as she says, but also tells Lola to do what he wants, which usually ends in fail. He is good at fixing the animatronics when Lola's messed them up. He prefers to use Leo and Robbie's real names and tries to be as nice as possible to them. However, he is also a bit like Lola. He is only how he is because he had an abusive father and his mother died. He helped Lola create the game.
 * Leo "Jockstrap" Silva - Leo is one of the play in the game. He is somewhat confident, or at least more confident that his friend. He has a jock kind of style - and thus the nickname "Jockstrap" was born. He is left to wander around to avoid the animatronics and will soon befriend Aeron.
 * Robbie "Preppy" Benvenuto - Robbie is the other player in the game. He is scared of many things in the game, including Lola. He is on camera duty and must stay with Lola. However, he soon becomes friends with her and they start to get along. 