Board Thread:Pitches/@comment-24922299-20140716203248

I had an idea for The Dark Side's pilot

 I'm thinking about it could be 3 girls and 3 boys. There names could be Charner, Empress, Merliah, Link, Somers, and Edsel  Charner Casen:Charner is the average and perky girl out if the trio and tends to have a positive outlook on life. She is also the life of the party and tends to act as one.

Emelyn Wakem:The quiet one out of the girls, she often most likely to choose the easy way out. She has a phobia of ghost and actually believe the spirit if Alixa exist but manages to doubt it a little.

Merliah Quinn: The wild one out of the girls, she loves to try to tempt people especially during games and she hates when people try to take the easy way out.

Somers Rave:The arrogant and boastful boy out of the three. He tends to brag about either how strong he is or his much money he had.

Link Hale:The quiet one out of the boys who isn't very scared of the mythical creatures or the ghost he had her about, deep inside he is very dark.

Edsel Howard:Edsel is very much like Charner only he can control himself and doesn't get influcened by the negativity around him.  Anyway they're on the last day of summer vacation and it's on this old island lake (I'll come up with it later) that is supposedly haunted but none of them are buying the haunted idea of the island so they decide to have a campfire before it's off to school in the morning. So Merliah suggests they play a game of truth or dare. Everyone is totally into it except for (you guys can help chose who). The group convinces them that it is just a game but eventually they realize this is no game. Soon (which one) picks dare after years of picking nothing but truth and the group decides they are going to get he/she good. They dare them to go into haunted cave where the ancient Alixa, ghost of the island lives and spend the night there. Everyone says she's just a myth and that usually myths are not true. While spending the night there, they hear spooky eerie noises but they think it's just the group trying to scare them, eventually they walk over to where the noise is coming from and scream "knock it off" until they realize that the myth is true and Alixa tells them that "this is no nightmare, nor is this a dream but it will be your end, all of your ends." and all that is left is the teens screaming 1 by one after the other. Anything you want to change, also how do we shorten this ? Also I'm thinking Emelyn might be the person who always picks truth instead of dare.  