Board Thread:Pitches/@comment-25314580-20161123211403/@comment-8475730-20161201022623

"redo everything" isn't criticism. it's harsh and rude. why is it boring to you ? what about the plot do you find boring ? giving someone "critism" by telling them their entire plotline is boring is not gonna help the creator get better, but, as you did, make the creator feel like crap. we take creative critisim here gogobell, so learn to criticize.

as for my personal opinion, i don't really see any plot here. you have the idea for what the story wants to be based around, which seems like a fun and extensious idea, but what exactly is the story ? i see the main character is a human who wants to witness the witching hour, so that's awesome. a good way to start. but why does she want too ? and what happens when she expirences it ? what even is in the expirence ? id be nice for a like more detail on those aspects.