Board Thread:Pitches/@comment-3532537-20140205041700/@comment-4146635-20140422032008

You should start off explaining the characters or the situation rather than putting it in a build up kind of form, ya know? I spruced it up a bit. This might work:


 * Fashionable and chic, Layla Brandon, is a straight A student who gets assigned to tutor the new kid at her school, Cole. Chemistry test after chemistry test, Cole is constantly flunking each one. But, Layla soon learns that it's because him and his buddies have been hard at work preparing for an upcoming Robot Wars tournament they are going to participate, in under the team name "Jet 3." The team must build an extreme robot and then battle it out in the arena. When Cole notices Layla herself has a secret gaming and nerdy side, he asks her to join the team to satisfy the rule of having 4 or more members. His teammates on the other hand, Wyatt and Jet, along with a lot of the other robotic community competitors, doubt that a fashionable girly-girl like Layla is capable of dealing with something as intelligent as robotics. Now, with her fashion intact and confidence fresh, Layla is ready even more to win the Robot Wars and prove to everyone and herself that girls can have both brains and beauty.