Board Thread:Pitches/@comment-24449517-20150531230821/@comment-24449517-20150609134412

Thanks NYCgleek and DatNuttyKid and yes everyone as they stated most of which is applied already. I stated the locations not only in this pitch, but the cast which I fully announced here again with the plot and in the original casting call. I do comprehend that I may however need more space to show you all my vision again because I realize a lot of you may not want to go back to the original pitch for the series where it was all explained;

The first season will show Jacq adjusting to lifestyles of everyday people, balancing both going to school and hiding her secret from people at school, along with fighting crime and trying to control her deadly storm power. Since the pilot will be an hour long I was considering making the season finale called "Storm Watch" etc.

I feel like episode ideas would actually spoil a lot of the show but I did however want to ask a question to Jessie1010 and Heatherblast9. I want to give Jacq a best friend in the series. A main role that would play a big part in the show. For the first season she wouldn't know about Jacq's powers but her name is Felicia Marx. She would appear in the next episode after the pilot titled "Hi Felicia" (a play on words of the popular slang expression "Bye Felicia!" The reason I wanted to ask Heatherblast9 or Jessie1010 was because I wanted her to be played by either the Syndey Park or the Teala Dunn look a like. It would be like a Harper from Wizards of Waverly Place, Lily from Hannah Montana or even Riley from Henry Danger sort of role. It is a big one and she's not just a best friend who doesn't appear much.

In the episode Jacq tries to befriend mean girl Felicia Marx when they get paired together for a science project. Blaine tries to warn him that she can be a bit mean but after Jacq saves her from almost being hit by a car (pushing her out the way not using her powers) Felicia befriends her and likes her because she doesn't know her and won't just judge her like most of the kids at school.

During the first season, Steve will try to find a way to get Jacq back in her game world, while at the same time trying to make sure Jacq has taken care of any monsters that manage to slip through. Though he always fails. This is sort of like a running gag. If any of you remember how on "Phil of the Future" the father always thought he found a way to fix the time machine, but never really did until the end.

The first actual season focuses on Jacq (and Blaine) adjusting to their new lives together. It's kind of like an Alex and Justin relationship. Jacq isn't a bad girl though, but relationship wise, Jacq and Blaine might not always see eye to eye but they bring out the best in each other. Jacq is like Star and Ally Dawson fused into one. Quirky, lovable, smart, easily distracted, always means well and can be tough if she has to. Blaine is like Justin or Avery, tells a lot of long winded jokes that only he really understands and he enjoys school and studying and is kind of uptight.

Jacq, well she's pretty much like an alien, so I might extend episodes later but for now I want to make sure Jacq's story line is taken care of and not just try to put out random episodes with no meaning because I have a large order and can't keep up. With this being my first wiki channel original series I want it to be my best and one of the best.

I really didn't want to use "the Thundermans" theme (Living a Double Life) for the series but I feel like it would be the best fit because they have a boy and girl singing it and the show centers around Jacq but also her relationship with Blaine. I also think the theme song fits the series overall perfectly, "What you see is not what you get, Livin' our life with a secret... A picture perfect family, Is what we try to be, look closer you might see the crazy things we do" you know? It just works.

and that is my full detailed, (very long) descriptive and laid out plans for the first season of "Storm Girl" I hope all of you can understand and see my vision and support my decisions and choices.