Board Thread:Pitches/@comment-24799839-20150805133228/@comment-25375217-20150814181428

I like the new Luke and Amanda plot. I think Sierra changing her mind could maybe be pushed back to episode 8, and maybe 10 and 11 could be combined.

Some of these don't really work for an entire 30 minute episode though. For example, episode 4. What's the actual plot, besides Ryan telling Sierra how he feels? How is this going to last 30 minutes? Is there a subplot? If so, what is it? Episode 5 too, especially if you're going to split the Lukemanda plot into two different episodes. What else is happening besides Luke asking Amanda out?