Board Thread:Pitches/@comment-7665418-20140623052402/@comment-4146635-20140623054853

I love love love this pilot! I think it'd be fantastic! I really like the layout of it and the plotline. It definitely sets the show up well for what is to come in the series.

One thing I do think though is that maybe in the beginning, there should be more shown of Brian's old Broadway career, to give more insight about what he was. Maybe the episode could begin with Brian in a musical number on Broadway. He's happily singing and dancing and then halfway through, a big red X appears on the screen and a reporter begins to say "Brian Fosterman, the Broadway actor you know and love, is not so lovable after all." And then the clip of him on Broadway goes into a smaller box and a reporter is shown talking about it. Then it'd show some more clips with Brian and the paparazzi and then it'd show Brian turning the TV off.