Board Thread:Pitches/@comment-24799839-20150816001354/@comment-7665418-20150820230032

Okay, so Im all caught up on this pitch and one thing I have say is sweetie, please slow down.

Like it's amazing to think so far ahead but you gotta focus on the main plot and build the foundation before you can finish building the tower.

Like I need to know the current plot because it has been switched around and Im really confused. Is the mom rich? Is he a dancer or actor?