Board Thread:Pitches/@comment-24799839-20150816001354/@comment-24799839-20150821165524

Okay, this is the new plot. I will change it if it's also not clear.

Plot
In the Country of Florida, One Teen, Eric is forced by his rich mother to be a dancer but all he really wants to be is an actor so he auditions for a commercial insecret and starts his acting career. Also, the Series is also about Eric's also teen brother, Mason. Mason doesn't know that Eric is starting his acting career. He just wants to be a dancer, his mother is not forcing him. He just wants to be a dancer so he auditions for a dancing studio and meets a dancer, Tara that he has a crush on. Now they face life, romance, secrets, breakups, dates and passion. It's there Life.

Anyway
What do you think, should I change it?