Board Thread:Pitches/@comment-25375217-20150820024826/@comment-7665418-20150820202921

So it's pretty cool, but I do have some comments. Like Matt, I agree no one in popular in college so like freedom and all that should be Jamie's man focus.

And I have a question about the background. Is Jamie's dad in the picture like who is watch the twins if their mom is at college like if she is going like Jamie is. She is not gonna be home like that, especially the first year.

And I feel like Jamie having two majors like music and business would be cool for character developments but that's just a suggestion.

But that's all :)