Board Thread:Pitches/@comment-4041126-20140531173229/@comment-4041126-20140622224612

The plot or summary? If it's the plot, here's what I have. (Sorry I didn't know I was supposed to edit the plot more.)

Six talented teens are called in for a special opportunity that has to do with their gifts. There are two teams at first, and they have three days to escape a very difficult maze/ mansion. Dr.Ludvig, the one that is hosting the competition, it trying to make them use their talents as much as possible so he can use the results to make a serum to make him the ultimate human. After trying  to escape on their own, but failing, some of them finally call it quits, and asks to go home. Dr.Ludvig refuses to let them go, and they realize this is not some game or competition. They realize they have to work together, each and every one of them, using their talents. Danger, pride, and a bit of romance ensues, but a strong friendship and great teamwork can battle through it all.

Here are some things I've and we've thought of added to the plot. I didn't know if you wanted what would be in the whole movie or what, so I just summarized it a bit.

I'm thinking the teens should be 15, or around there. So basically 6 teens are called to compete in a show that is involved with their talents with a grand prize of $50,000. It is every man for himself to try to escape the maze. When Ben decides he doesn't need to look like a fool to win, he decides to call it quits, but when Dr.Ludvig doesn't let him go, he realizes that he and the others are actually seriously trapped. He tries to tell the others, but nobody really believes him, until Dr.Ludvig reveals his plan accidentally. They all decide to become a team, except Randy and Devon. Devon wants to show them he can do it on his own, resulting in an argument. Rhiley then helps them come to a peaceful agreement. Randy decided to be in quietly when Devon and the others were arguing. They go through different traps, clues, and riddles that needs everyone of their talents involved. The longer they take, the closer Dr. Ludvig is to finishing the results. In the middle of the movie, Avalon almost gets seriously hurt and the group starts to argue about who's fault it is. Rhiley then gains courage, tells them enough is enough, and that it doesn't matter who's fault it is, it just matters that they are all still okay.So, they go on, and Rhiley and Randy discover the fault that almost hurt Avalon but doesn't tell anyone. So they keep going with their mission, but the snarky and sarcastic remarks still occur. Near the end, they finally have reached the solution to the maze. Devon, being athletic, easily gets through the last obstacle, and everyone gets through but is far behind. He has a choice:To go out and tell the world he did it all and then show he is not a barbarian, or to wait for his new friends and get one sixth of the credit. He chooses the latter, and they all come out at about the same time. The FBI were already on the scene, and the kids told them how to get to Dr.Ludvig and make it out since they already figured all the obstacles out and eliminated most of them. Dr.Ludvig is then arrested, and the kids are recognized greatly for their work.

So I really didn't know exactly what Matt was asking for, but if I still didn't do it right, feel free to explain. Plus, tell me if there are any plot changes you'd like to add or remove.