Board Thread:Pitches/@comment-25314580-20161123211403/@comment-25828160-20161204200140

I find the concept to be unrealistic. (Witching hour, and witches, and elves, and giants)

Too much.

And then Dracula and then Artemisia and Talon. And then that girl who adds in rainbows ! And that girl that is Peter-Pan like. And Peter-Pan in person (Vancul) Like what ???!!!!!!

What is the plot ?

None of this is organized.

You can't have Peter Pan like, with Dracula. This is already weird.