Board Thread:Pitches/@comment-25375217-20150524004705/@comment-25375217-20150605215736

I didn't "bypass 90% of your message" You mentioned the 18 year-old kidnapping her and forcing her to marry him, which I stated was supposed to be vaguely creepy because he's an antagonist. You mentioned the "random guy" and I explained where he came from. You mentioned its weird that she's getting married at 16 and I said she doesn't (besides the creepy antagonist thing, which doesn't happen either). Anything else I somehow missed (which, rereading your post, I'm pretty sure I didn't) was in the full summary. And if you're gonna "rush through" reading the summary, don't try pointing out plotholes because you probably just missed it.

I wouldn't go through the "repeating myself" thing if I didn't have to.