Board Thread:Pitches/@comment-24799839-20150805133228/@comment-25375217-20150813201958

That's a little better. That's the kind of thing you should have included in the original pitch. It gives an air of professionalism and it sounds like you've actually thought about what the show is going to be about and what the characters are like, whereas something as simple as "he has blond hair and is good in school" sounds simple and not something we need as a series.