Board Thread:Pitches/@comment-7665418-20140623052402/@comment-24449517-20140623155403

Just reading this and I honestly really enjoy the pilot and the idea Jessie1010 listed. I also feel that maybe they shouldn't change Brian's style though. I feel like he shouldn't have to change hisself in that sense. Maybe yeah, he learns not to be so high mantinence but I feel like he should stay true to his self and dress how he pleases. Maybe even on certain occaisions we could have Michael make fun of some of his dress shirts or silver dress shoes < That would just be an example.

My feedback on well as Jessie1010's comment. I agree for the most part. Maybe we can even show what actually happened like at the beginning of the episode they see him practicing for the audition and right before he goes on stage he tells hisself good things and does something funny and after he goes out and does his thing and then something goes wrong maybe his with his mom and they say Honey do not worry, it's not that bad and then maybe it jumps to him watching tv or some broadway update news feed online with his parents and the anchor says oh, it's that bad following the giant red x and the story?