Board Thread:Pitches/@comment-25375217-20150524004705/@comment-7665418-20150524141211

To be honest, I'm kinda confused about the whole thing. Okay,so the girl's world is like opposite of everything and like her parents tell her to drop out (that right they will have picket signs out the window...lol) and then this martian who can't even speak english comes to earth and kidnaps her and threatens her to be his princess or destory earth, which is whoa...okay. And then the translator and her try to stop it...but then they is another random guy apparently right for the throne and gets married to her at the end and she only 16, getting married. And there is an 18 year old trying to marry a foreign 16 year old like thats not creepy.

My point is...the pitch seems promising but they are a lot of plot holes and stuff that need to be adjust or everyone is gonna be really confused.