Board Thread:Pitches/@comment-25214621-20150626215525/@comment-25375217-20150628001318

I love it! Although, the Ashton scene and Naomi seem a little... unnecessary? I think the role of Ashton is just to show how great of a life Kara has, and then Naomi kind of undermines that, y'know? But then Ashton breaking up with Kara seems just unfair, because there doesn't appear to be anything leading up to it and she doesn't get another love interest or anything, so it's just unfair to her. It would be one thing if she ended up with Ethan or something, and no one except her likes Ashton, but the way it is right now it just seems like it comes out of nowhere.

I did have some title ideas. Maybe "Long Way to Seattle" or "Road Trip"?