Board Thread:Pitches/@comment-8475730-20140320012631/@comment-8475730-20140324032513

So here's your modified plot. Make changes if you think it's bad.

Renee Sage had everything any teenage girl can ask for. She was rich, popular, pretty, and to top it off, had a super cute boyfriend. But after her super sucseful dad almost looses almost everything on one of his cases, Much to her dismay, Renee and her parents are forced to move in with her withdrawn uncle, and she has to help him with his sardine shop. When her friends catch her working there, they embarass her in from of the whole school, kicking her off the social ladder. Now she is 'forced' to hang out with William, a boy she used to bully in the popular group. She hates it, and complains about it all the time. But as she gets the 'loser treatment', she realizes the mistakes in what she did, and tries to change the ways of her ex-best friends.