Board Thread:Pitches/@comment-7665418-20151103005339/@comment-1692590-20151103022339

It's an interesting take on the "double life" story. I like it. The pitfall to avoid would be the whole "I can't let anyone find out because I only want to be normal" cliche, you need to either avoid it entirely, or you need to come up with an original enough reason to keep it compelling.