Board Thread:Pitches/@comment-24799839-20150816001354/@comment-25375217-20150816020312

I think this has potential!

I do have a few things though. First off, if Carley changed her hair color every single day it would completely destroy her hair. That's just not safe. And also, uh... why is it special that she changes clothes every day?

Secondly, I think the idea of Eric somehow hiding from his entire family and friend group that he's on TV is a little farfetched. That's a huge secret to keep. Maybe the first season would just have him doing an acting camp and maybe some smaller gigs like commercials, then in the second season he gets cast in a series and someone finds out?

Thirdly, Lilly Marsh is the name of an actress and it's a little confusing to have a character share her name. Please rename the character.

And lastly, is Season 1 actually going to be split into two parts, or did you just copy the box from Edgewater Falls/In Due Time's page?