Board Thread:Pitches/@comment-25375217-20150331214735/@comment-3532537-20150331231803

Okay so I kind of agree with Heather, however I think maybe if we add a plot or deepen it a bit we can make a good movie. What if? and I'm just spit balling here. He's a smart kid, like overly smart! He is very sure of himself, but when he was in 7th grade he gets very sick, anywho he applies to get into Harverd Law school, however when going over his grades and requirements with the guidance counslar they see that he didn't pass or actually graduate 7th grade due to him once getting sick from like an asthma attack? anywho, at the beginning of the film, hes on his bike going to school but some kid playing with his friend crashes his toy helitopter into his bike and both things (the bike and the helicopter) break and he doesn't have time to tak to the kid he just rushes to school, so anyway after he gets to school late and talks to the guidance counslar she informs him he can still graduate on time, since he was in the early program he finished his senior year half way through the second semester and was planning on doing some early college courses, but she tells him if he can pass the 7th grade class before the year is over he can go on to college. There he meets. you guessed it, the 7th grade boy (im picturing Ryan Diggs) and at first they dont get along, but he realizes the boy gets bullied by some 8th graders and the main character Jonathan needs help trying to impress a girl, who helps aids their class (she is a senior too like Jonathan but is doing an early student teacher program) Jonathan helps the kid with his bully and the kid helps Jonathan get the student teacher girl and help keep his secret from the whole school as he tries to pass 7th grade before the end of the semester. The girl thinks it's sweet he's really confident but he is secrely hiding it, and when he gets an argument with the kid he says "you think i want to be seen with a bunch of stupid 7th graders?!" and the girl is watching and the kid is upset and says "i never liked you anyway!" and runs off now he tries to fix it and at the end of the film at the graduation he gives the valdictorian speech and says "I also . . .wanna thank, my my friend and hallway buddy, (the little kid's name) for always having my back. He's my friend because and admits to the school he had to go back)" meanwhile the girl is in the graduation audience and smiles and his friends look at him shocked and as everyone laughs they stand up for him. idk sorry i totally changed the plot lol sorry sorry. just an idea i had XD but yeah i just picture movies in my head, but what do you think

back to what you had, i think it could work as a movie if the plot deepens (not saying you have to use what i wrote) in general, because i dont think it can work as a tv show, unless it's a cartoon or a show that we pick up for one season and ends after 1 XD