Board Thread:Pitches/@comment-4041126-20140725214845/@comment-4041126-20140730031733

Okay, so let me see:

Brianna (means tough, btw) has been bounced from one family to another, the longest amount of time until she drives them completely nuts 3 days. She has made herself become hated by everyone: Therapists, social security ladies, sweet old ladies, new couples, small families, big families, you name it. When she is finally released to be on her own when she turns 18, she realizes that she has nothing but her first name, and a limited amount of clothing.(means she doesn't have a closet full of clothes, don't get the wrong idea)Mrs. Sendy finds Brianna, instantly feels a motherly instinct towards her, and invites her to stay the night at her place. Brianna reluctantly agrees, and after hearing her story, Mrs. Sendy feels compelled to help her and decides to take her in. Brianna, having no choice, ends up agreeing. Mr. Sendy also says she must attend college with Aaron, and try to find a career that puts promise in her future.

I don't think I went too much into detail, but is there a better way we can shorten this? lol